Preview my new release, More Than Truth!

The first book in this series, More Than Memories, released in the spring quite a while ago… years ago actually! It was a standalone romantic suspense novel, and it wasn’t until about two years ago that I realized there was much more to tell here.

The first book revolved around Molly’s return after a four year absence due to memory loss. That loss comes back in this book; as you’ll see, it opens during the summer after all of them graduated.


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More Than Truth on Amazon

Some truths should stay buried. Others refuse to die.

When a convicted killer is released on new DNA evidence, Trent Williams expects controversy. Instead he gets a new case and a possible killer in town. They were all at the lake party that summer long ago, the night Wendy Harper vanished. The real killer could be any one of them: one of their friends, a local cop, or town resident.

The original evidence was ignored, which pointed to several suspects. The wrongly imprisoned man now wants to find the truth. Then a copycat murder rocks Ridge City—and Trent’s family becomes the target of a chilling message: You ruined my life.

It all happened the summer Molly Williams disappeared. Her memory of that time is scattered at best… and yet certain images keep coming back to haunt her, like a cabin in the mist.

The past is haunting them all. But is the killer hunting them right now?


Prologue

The July Fourth After Graduation

A shooting star streaked across the black sky high above their campfire and circle of chairs. Eighteen-year-old Alicia tracked it until it disappeared behind the old growth forest crowding around the lake. Was it a sign? It had to be good luck for the rest of their lives, starting this summer.

A few of them were singing or humming along with the song playing in the pickup a ways off. A fitting song about living in a small town.

She shivered as the night air settled around them, even though her face and arms were hot from the fire. They’d all swam in the lake as the sun set, and her damp hair felt cold on her neck.

Once it was dark, some of the guys lit fireworks over the lake and on the sandy beach where it was big enough to be safe. She liked watching them… But this was better. The quiet noises of nature, the crackling fire, and laughter.

Suddenly another huge star blazed across the sky, this one so bright it had a long tail.

“Did you see that?!” Alicia squealed and pointed up, sitting across the bonfire from her older brother Trent. Slightly older brother Trent. “That’s the biggest shooting star I’ve ever seen!”

She looked back down at their circle of friends: Trent and Molly, Wendy and Colby, Mark, and his cousin Jaycen with his girlfriend Lauren. They were a couple years older, so that automatically made them seem more sophisticated. Plus, they’d driven up from California two weeks ago, both with golden tans and honey blond hair like a Hollywood couple. So far everyone liked them.

“It’s technically an asteroid,” Colby said under his breath to his girlfriend Wendy. Alicia rolled her eyes but didn’t comment.

“Let’s make a wish!” she said.

“I wish…” Wendy closed her eyes while her mouth moved silently. Her dark hair looked extra shiny in the campfire light.

“I want another six pack!” CJ yelled from out in the darkness, and a couple football players with him whooped. They were hanging out about thirty feet away by the tree line, at the back end of the pickup truck with the tailgate down to hold the beer coolers.

Groans followed from around the campfire where her group sat.

In between songs, an owl screeched off in the distance, probably across the lake from them, reminding them of all the nature out there in the dark. Sometimes they even heard coyotes out here but no one really worried about them.

“Seriously!” Alicia added loudly. In a normal voice, she added to her friends, “What should we wish for? For all of us?”

“More nights like this,” her brother Trent said, soft orange light dancing on his face. He turned his head to gaze at his girlfriend Molly. They sat snuggled up, their heads resting against each other, her dark curls falling on his shoulder.

Molly was Alicia’s best friend… and it was a little weird that she was dating Trent. Or, it was at first. Now it seemed like it was always meant to be.

“Yes!” Mark raised his beer. “More campfires! Fishing trips. And smooth sailing when we apply to the Police Academy.”

Alicia raised her Pepsi with only a little hesitation. She wanted her brother to be happy. Both Trent and Mark wanted to be officers on the Ridge City police force. Mark was focused on his goal, ignoring everything else. Trent, on the other hand, spent a ton of time with Molly. Was that good for someone who wanted to be a cop?

Mark and Alicia were the only two single people sitting around the fire, but they’d always been just friends. He was good-looking. Tall, lean, an easy smile. Curly blond hair that made all the girls want to touch it. Maybe the two of them never entertained the idea because he was her brother’s best friend. But he had been there for her too.

Everyone here was woven into the memories of her growing up years. Almost everyone out here at the lake too. Ridge City was a small town and everyone knew everyone. The jocks, skaters, and smart kids had their own groups but it all overlapped.

“Mol, what about you, babe?” Trent asked, pulling their blanket over her shoulder where it was slipping. Molly leaned her head back to give him a sly smile.

“A nice house, babies… and some kind of cool business.”

Everyone snickered. Molly had a different business idea for every day of the week. Alicia almost cracked a joke but the love was sizzling between her brother and best friend.

“Maybe some wedding bells in there?” Trent said, his low voice making Molly giggle. Those two.

“Yes, some wedding bells too,” Molly whispered.

“Get a room!” Colby said even though he was tucked in with his girlfriend too. Or, actually, Wendy was in her own chair.

Alicia wanted romance like that. Sometime later, maybe. She had plans and didn’t want to get sidetracked.

“I wish we could stay longer,” Lauren said wistfully. She was an outsider, but she came here with Mark’s cousin, Jaycen.

Alicia looked her way and tried to read her expression in the flickering orange light. She was kinda fancy for their group, not that they were snobs or anything. Just… Lauren really dressed to impress even though it sounded like she came from a small town too. Alicia’s mom had commented it seemed like Lauren was “putting on airs” to make up for something.

Anyway, her wish surprised Alicia.

Lauren’s light blond hair gleamed as the fire crackled and popped. They were a fun couple. Well, Jaycen was super fun. Always singing and joking. Maybe it’d be cool if they got to stay longer, but he’d come for a seasonal summer job.

“You never know, honeycakes,” Jaycen said jokingly, but in that honeyed voice of his, while his arms wrapped around her so one draped between her knees. “You never know what the future holds.”

Lauren didn’t smile. Alicia tried to read her expression better but couldn’t. It was Jaycen’s face catching the light, his wide smile and thick blond hair. It was straight and shiny, a little long like he wanted to look dangerous. Or sexy. Dangerous was a funny word to use.

“Alicia, what about you?” Molly asked her, breaking into her thoughts. “College and taking on the world?”

“Yeah, what about you?” Wendy asked from right next to her. Everyone was under a blanket with their boyfriend, Wendy included. She was sitting with Colby.

Alicia turned their way. “You first.”

“I want…” Wendy paused, thinking, but Alicia knew her friend had plans. Maybe she was nervous to share them. “I want to go to U of O, for Ocean Studies.”

“For what?” Colby asked in a condescending way.

“Ocean Studies,” Wendy said with a scoff. “As if you care. Or know what that is.”

“That’s super cool,” Alicia told her, cutting off the argument before it started. Wendy was one of her close friends. Not quite as close as Molly, her best friend. Still, she hoped all of them would stay close after this summer. Everything was changing…

An awkward silence was building so Alicia shared.

“I wish… that I get all A’s in college.”

“Seriously?” Colby asked while also covering a burp with his elbow.

“Gross!”

“Seriously,” Alicia said, raising her soda can in a toast to herself. “College and taking on the world.”

She wasn’t ready to tell anyone she wanted to write novels.

Campfire smoke caught her in the face then and she tilted her head back to breathe.

She saw another shooting star. This time, she made a silent wish. Two wishes.

I wish to be a writer someday.

And… I wish we’re always friends.

Chapter One

Molly Williams – Present Day

Molly Williams stepped outside her front door to retrieve the morning paper. She paused to appreciate the soft mist clinging to the tall evergreens on the other side of the private road leading deeper into the property. The morning sun was burning through the mist to create a halo bursting through the old growth trunks.

Robins hopped through the Rhodies growing close to the house, chirping good morning to everyone. She loved their yard, and this entire property where they would ride horses and take the kids on picnics.

She sipped her steaming black coffee and grabbed the paper, then stilled as she caught sight of a few words.

…Killer Colby Whitbourn…

She knew that name.

She shook it out to read the full title before stepping inside and hurrying back toward the kitchen and her husband, Trent. Her two children stopped their play to look up as she sped by, trying not to slosh coffee.

“It’s okay, kids!” she called. Shyann had poked her head into the hallway. Molly glanced back to make sure her daughter had rejoined Lucus. They were already giggling.

Trent startled, setting his own mug down without taking the planned drink.

“Have you seen this?” Molly slapped the morning edition of the Ridge City Review down on the table in front of his coffee, anger and fear burning in her chest. “Candice didn’t think to call us?”

Candice, a tall reporter with pretty brown eyes, ran the local paper on her own, and was somewhat of a friend. At least, they helped each other. Before retiring from the police force, Trent shared some information with her and she did the same. Candice had been working with Trent’s sister Alicia on a book, too, about a true crime here in Ridge City.

They kept a subscription to the paper over their friendship.

Trent lifted the paper to read the headline out loud, “DNA Evidence Exonerates Convicted Killer Colby Whitbourn. What…? How is this possible?”

Two photos sat side by side on the front page. On the left, a mug shot showed a young and despondent Colby Whitbourn, his head tilted forward as he glared at the camera. His dark blond hair looked greasy, slicked in different directions. Molly could remember his light green eyes that made up for his plain face. The photo didn’t capture his eye color well.

On the right, a young woman with light blue eyes and dark hair smiled for her senior photo. How sad that her life and name would always be shadowed by her murder.

“What happened that summer?” Molly asked, sitting down and springing up again to pace. “All these memories are swamping my brain…” She bracketed her head with her hands, flustered. “I didn’t forget this too, did I?”

Trent held out a calming hand, waiting until she looked him in the eye.

“It’ll come back, and if it doesn’t, I’ll talk you through it, okay?” He waited for her nod and refocused on the paper.

She’d lost her memory a long time ago, and although she regained it, once in a great while something popped up that made her question things from the past. This was one of them.

“What evidence? Is it new?” he mumbled to himself, beginning to read.

Colby Whitbourn spent over a decade in prison–for a crime he didn’t commit. Whitbourn was convicted for the murder of Wendy Harper, a recent high school graduate at the time. All the clues pointed to him, and he was convicted on circumstantial evidence.

Whitbourn maintained his innocence and this past year the Innocence Project worked with state authorities and new technologies to clear his name.

While police did discover DNA evidence during the investigation, it was inconclusive at the time and not usable in court. However, new techniques have developed ways to test the old samples, and this revealed that Colby Whitbourn is innocent. This story is unfolding and more information will be forthcoming.

Trent leaned back, his gaze focused on the slider. It offered a view of their expansive backyard that backed into forest, but Molly doubted he was actually looking at the view.

“This says Colby wasn’t a match to the DNA sample, but that doesn’t mean…” He glanced over and let the rest of his words fade away.

Molly folded her arms and chewed on a fingernail while pacing. It sounded like Trent was already working a case while she was trying to process this.

“I’m not sure why it’s upsetting me so much,” she said quietly. “It’s like I’m remembering it for the first time since… since that summer and what happened. I feel horrible, like I simply pushed it out of mind all this time.”

“Mol, hey,” he said, reaching out to her. She didn’t go to him. “That was the summer before you lost your memory, when you hurt your head and your parents took you and fled town. That year before has always been fuzzy for you. Don’t blame yourself.”

He had a point. She’d spent four years in California after that, no memory of who she was or what had happened here in Ridge City. That could be why this got all but erased. Now, however, it was burning up through her memories and wrecking havoc on her stomach.

Almost like there was more to it.

Trent rose and pulled her into a tight hug, rubbing a hand up and down her back. They stood together, body to body, sharing heat and strength. Molly laid her head on his chest and listened to his heartbeat, going back in time.

Did she remember that year correctly, or was it tinted through the trauma of the next few years?

“That was a great summer until things went south,” he murmured, and she knew he planned to talk her through things and calm her nerves. “We were so young. Fresh out of high school. We were secretly talking about marriage anyway. Maybe not so secretly. Alicia was all fired up about going to college. Mark knew he wanted to go into law enforcement.”

“So did you.” She remembered all of that, and how they were trying to fit in as much life and memory making as possible, because some of them were moving on. Life was a big open road ahead of them, full of possibilities, and change. “Do you remember her?”

“Wendy Harper… Yeah, of course I do. I knew we weren’t super close, but she went through all twelve years of school with us. She hung out with us a lot our senior year and that summer.”

“I remember going to the lake with everyone… more than once.”

“More than once,” he echoed with a small laugh. “More like once a week. Our smaller group, anyway. You and me,” he started listing, “Mark, Alicia, Colby, Wendy, and Jaycen. That was Mark’s cousin, and Jaycen’s girlfriend, Lauren too. They stayed for two months.”

“I don’t remember him…”

“They were just visiting anyway.”

As she remembered, she smelled the lake, the campfire smoke, and Trent’s cologne that he wore back then. She could see the stars in the black sky, the tree line across the lake, as she sat by the campfire with everyone.

She remembered swimming in the lake in the evenings, jumping off the dock, and then how cold the air grew late at night.

She remembered that summer… but not the exact night Wendy vanished.

“Hmm.” Trent made a noise that meant he wasn’t happy about something. “The thing that’s always stuck out to me… It wasn’t what I saw, but what I missed. I don’t know if I talked to Wendy that night, and I just barely remember seeing her once or twice. I didn’t have any useful information.”

“That’s not your fault.” She tried to look up at his face but couldn’t see his expression.

“Still.”

“Wendy went to the bathroom,” she said almost like a confession. “And didn’t come back. Once we realized, everyone started looking and yelling for her.”

Molly leaned back. Trent loosened his embrace so they could see each other before he said, “It came out that Wendy was starting to see another guy and Colby found out. I’m not sure if you were here to hear that, or the end of the investigation.”

“End of the investigation?” She didn’t follow.

He sighed. “A month later, a hiker found a gravesite out past the reservoir. It turned out to be Wendy.”

She stepped back and wrapped her arms around herself. Did she remember that? Her memory grew foggy sometime during that summer.

Little Lucas ran into the room, giggling, with Shyann right behind him. She wiggled her fingers in front of her like monster claws. They ran around the table, and back out again, with Shyann’s curls making a long cape behind her.

Trent watched them with a soft smile on his face. Molly waited for him to call out for them to slow down but he was too distracted. He refreshed his coffee mug and handed it to her. With a wave toward the paper, he said, “Candice probably thought we knew. I mean, I’m not on the force but Mark’s my best friend.”

“Surely he knew? He’s the chief now. How come he didn’t know?”

“Or didn’t tell us,” Trent said softly, implying that Mark Stone, the Ridge City Chief of Police, might have chosen not to tell them. “I’ll find out more when I head in. I’m sure Mark will want my help digging into the old files.”

Again? She didn’t like how often he was pulled back to the station, to his old life as a detective. They ran a retreat on their property now, which had been Trent’s idea.

But, the old life still pulled at him. The past always wanted them back.

Cover Reveals & New Releases!

So the third Mystery Falls novel is releasing right now… the paperback is out and the ebook will release Sunday. That one has holiday cheer, ghosts, a bookstore, mystery, inherited secrets, and slow-burn romance… and it was so much fun to write! It really put me in the Christmas spirit as the story starts around Thanksgiving and goes through the holidays.

Click to see this bookstore cozy mystery series on Amazon!

I’ve been working on a few thrillers too and wanted to share the covers…

Check out my Thrillers page for a full description…

Assistant for Hire is a game of “What’s really going on?”

That’s what drives my thrillers – the curiosity and journey of trying to discern who is really doing what.

The tone of this story is similar to The Perfect Husband… and a bit different from my other stories because it happens in paradise with warm weather and tiki drinks. And lots of intrigue.

This will be out this month!!


After that one, I’m working on a story with lots of mystery, family drama, intrigue… I’ll share more soon but I LOVE this cover and just had to share it with you.

This book is writing itself!

Happy 2019! I realized it’s about time to post an update, lol. What have you been up to? I’ve been immersed in art and freelance writing, although I haven’t worked on a novel until recently. Several ideas have been simmering on the back burner, but I held off, waiting for a spark, what I call those have-to-write ideas that grip me and make me write them. Those, incidentally, are also the novels readers really love.

So, I waited. And almost a year passed, and I kept telling myself, I’m an author. An good idea will come. A great idea will come. Because in the past, I would get great ideas all the time.

I’m so glad I waited instead of trying to grind out a novel that I wasn’t obsessed about writing. Now I’m 20,000 words into a first draft, and the words are flowing like I’m retelling a story I know by heart. But at the same time, I’m discovering it as I go.

I’m calling it A Stranger Like Me.

The story centers around Angie Duval, a private investigator of sorts, who comes to Eugene to locate a missing teen, 16 year old Candace. (She’s a pro but she also helps people that no one else wants to help.) She’s following a lead when she runs into herself–or, a mirror image of herself. Her newly discovered twin is named Vivi Leavitt, a school counselor who co-owns a women’s boutique slash bookstore with her mother.

Angie’s a loner who lives in her RV. Her family is Galaxy, a dog she found abandoned as a puppy out in the Eastern Oregon desert. Vivi is a perky bookworm, so basically Angie’s identical twin and complete opposite. Or so she thinks at first.

For most twins separated at birth, it’s awesome to find the other one. But these two both know they weren’t adopted. It doesn’t make sense, except that they were lied to. Angie’s mom passed away a year ago, leaving only questions.

Angie has a teen to find, who is apparently hanging with a man who calls himself Demon, so she can’t drop everything and dig into her birth situation. In fact, she’s worked hard to forget her childhood and wants to walk away from this too…except she can’t. So suddenly she has two cases, and one’s a little too personal.

Angie and Vivi don’t like what they find when they start investigating their parents, and the case with Candace gets complicated too.

The twins want to know why they were separated and lied to…but at the same time, they don’t. However, it’s starting to look like whatever happened is bigger than just them.

*So that’s the story so far. I can’t wait to share the rest of the story with you!

6 Years!!

I was looking through my Facebook page the other day and something hit me: I started that page and this blog back in March of 2011, six years ago!

It’s been a fun ride since then, and I’m so grateful not just that I get to be an author, but that I am living the life that I am. I’m a super creative person in several formats, and being self employed and working at home allows me to draw, paint, and explore other art forms. I like painting Oregon landscapes in acrylic and oil, drawing flowers for body art in temporary jagua ink, and I’m starting to explore things like wood burning and even tattooing fruit.

And of course I love to create new stories! It’s an amazing journey, and each novel is a process where I enjoy writing it, getting to know the characters and their arcs, and learning more about storytelling.

Seems like I should celebrate 6 years of blogging!

I posted an audiobook giveaway on my FB page, with 5 copies of Point Hope up for grabs.

And I have a bunch of my Kindle ebooks on a 99 cent special for a while, including Covetous if you haven’t read it yet!

I’ll come up with some fun things throughout the month of April too.

So my next novel…. a past/present time split story

I’ve been painting a lot so far this year, and I’ll share those below, but I wanted to tell you about the novel I’m writing. It’s about a woman in a dying marriage–Lily can grasp the issue but doesn’t know how to get around it. She desperately wants a baby and her husband Mic is dead set against it. She wishes for a different life and wakes up on the Oregon Trail with Mic and their children. That’s all I’m sharing for now! I’m 20,000 words into the book, and I’m not sure how long it’ll be. So more to come…!

Here’s a few of my paintings; I love painting Oregon forests and the beach. And the last pic is my newest tattoo–very Hawaiian themed this time!

 

10 Easy Steps to Write Your Novel

My newest writing guide is out! This project began when I tried writing a blog post about how to write a novel, but I quickly realized just how much I had to say on the topic. It turned into a 100 page guide on the entire process. Take a look at the table of contents below!

(More info on all my books for authors under Authorpreneur Press)

10 Easy Steps to Write Your Novel: The Quick Start Guide to Novel Writing.

Print for only 7.99

10 easy steps novel

The “Quick Start Guide” to outlining and writing your novel!

Helpful exercises with each step.

Tips for beginnings and more advanced writers.

Have you ever wondered how to write a novel? Have you started and got frustrated? Or have you written a few novels but still want to streamline your process and learn more about structure, plot, characters, setting, and putting it all together? Do you struggle with outlining? 10 Easy Steps to Write Your Novel covers developing ideas, conflict, characters, setting, big plot points, outlining, the writing process, writing scenes, and editing and revising.

Table of Contents:

  • Step 1: Develop your Idea
  • What about a title?
  • Developing “Sparks”
  • Questions to Consider
  • A Solid Foundation
  • Developing Your Idea Exercises
  • Step 2: Develop Your Conflict
  • Conflict Exercises
  • Step 3: Add Your Characters
  • Play Around with Character
  • Character Exercises
  • Define Your Characters
  • More Character Exercises
  • Step 4: Define Your Setting
  • Using Setting to Shape Story
  • Setting Exercises
  • Step 5: Outline your Big Plot Points
  • My Novel Structure
  • Expanding the 7 Plot Points
  • Step 6: Plan Act I to the Door of No Return
  • Outlining
  • What about Prologues?
  • That Opening Line
  • Beginnings
  • Genre Beginnings
  • “The Beginning” Exercises
  • Complications
  • The Door of No Return
  • Step 7: Plan Act II to the Midpoint
  • Act II Exercise
  • Low and High Points
  • Midpoint
  • Step 8: Act III: Plan the Middle to the End
  • Taking Action
  • Dark Moment
  • Climax
  • Resolution
  • Ending Exercises
  • The Last Line
  • Step 9: Writing
  • Writing Scenes
  • Should you write every day?
  • Should you set a daily word count goal?
  • Should you write in order?
  • Should you edit and revise during the first draft?
  • Staying in the flow
  • Keeping up your momentum
  • Celebrate your progress
  • Step 10: Re-writing & Editing
  • When should you share your work?
  • Critique Groups?
  • Start with the big issues
  • Checking Smaller Elements
  • Should you have a theme?
  • When is your novel finished?

Marcus and Avery on my mind

So whenever I’m working on a novel, the characters basically hang out in my head. I see them going about their day and think about how they think, talk, feel and dream. I’ll get scene ideas throughout the day or even think about how they’d react to what’s going on in my life. That has taken on a life of its own as I work on In My Dreams… I’m starting to feel like Avery in the first book! The reason is both Marcus and Avery feel so real to me. I can see the way Marcus’s eyes light up and how his face changes when he laughs good and hard, and I hear his comments. I’ll be picturing something for the story and hear him say, “That girly? Really? Dude, you’re turning me into a girl.” Or, “You think I’d hold back like that? When did my mouth get so PG?”

And I imagine Avery going through my crap with me – I’m pouring a lot of my emotions into her right now. My life took some crazy turns and I’m starting over in many ways, and she’s like a friend going through the same thing. When my emotions try to eat me alive, she’s there feeling it too. She’s gotta figure out who she is even while she cares about other people so much; it’s hard to see where the lines are. She’s surprised sometimes as she thinks, “Holy shit, I can do this.” But it’s still hard for her to own that.

So this is going to be one interesting sequel – I want it to be as raw and intense as the first one, or maybe even more so. There’s a crazy wild amount of possibilities too, now that Marcus is back in his body and they both have to figure out their relationship and their separate lives again. Of course they don’t want to be separate. Can you imagine having someone in your heart and mind 24-7 and then you can’t hear them anymore? It’s like falling off a cliff in the dark. That twirling free fall is a good metaphor for the emotions pouring out of them and into the story.

And this story isn’t about just them. We have all these other threads to pick up with Kristina, Kyle, Nash and Jazz. And some weird things happened when those guys started talking, and now some of them have their own chapters and are feeling certain things for each other… Yeah, a big hint there, but I don’t want to give away too much just yet!

First Tracks Series:    All in my Head     In My Dreams

When bullets fly

I haven’t wrote flash fiction in forever. The urge hit tonight, and I decided to play around with words and also write something without real dialogue.

When bullets fly

She didn’t see the bullet coming, but even if she had she wouldn’t have moved out of the way. She’d been waiting on that bullet for years.

As she went out to the car that morning, the lightning in the steel sky might have appeared as a sign to the superstitious, which she was. But she felt a strange lift in her chest and smiled. It wasn’t a happy or good smile. More like grinning as you go down in flames. You know that saying that lightning only strikes once? That’s only partly true. It strikes once with the really good stuff, but it hits the shit out of you with the bad.

As she watched the electricity branch across the sky at the stop of 23rd and Polk, a Chevy truck slammed into her rear bumper. After the jolt, she pushed open her door and rose shakily from the driver’s seat to address the other driver…a six foot five construction worker with a buzz cut who reeked of cigarette smoke. Of course he didn’t have insurance or the patience to stay and discuss it.

So maybe the lightning was a sign? Maybe she needed to go home and go back to bed. Some days just aren’t made for getting ahead.

But she didn’t.

She instead went to work to be greeted by the boss by the front door. Oddly, he wore a tie, and escorted her to his office to let her go.

Home and bed would have been the right course of action after that, except that the door was open at Johnnie’s Bar. Johnnie himself was inside finishing a meeting when she walked in. Normally they’d smile at each other. Today he took a look at her and poured a shot of bourbon. Luckily she downed it before the two men walked in shouting. And maybe more luckily, she downed Johnnie’s just as the bullets flew.

It was the strangest sensation past her ear. The spot of heat. The rush of wind. The following caress. And then the sound. The other sounds were far away, down a canyon as she stood still, glass in hand, turned toward the door and staring blankly. Both men wore black leather jackets. One tall, skinny and bald. The other shorter, round and lost in a hairy goatee. Silence rang loudly. Questions floated in the smoke. Mainly, why didn’t she move? They glanced at each other and backed up out the door. Seconds later, Johnnie peeked up from behind the bar. Jesus. What was she doing standing there? Was she hit?

When she finally did turn toward him, the light from the still open door illuminated a puff of hair floating like dust.

Johnnie kept those strands for good luck. She’s not sure if she’d call it luck, but she learned you can’t back down when the bullets fly.

New release for authors: 101 Questions to Improve Your Novel

It’s out in print and Kindle! And it’s in a new box set with Blockbuster Books, Broken Down–details below.

This book grew out of my experience editing and my own “final check list.”

101 Questions to Improve Your Novel: for Writing, Editing, Revising, and Polishing

From plot twists to dialogue, authors have a long list to think about when revising and polishing a novel. These 101 questions and explanations will help you improve and check your novel’s opening, plot and character development, conflict, pacing, dialogue, and of course the writing itself. After months or years of working on a story, it’s difficult to check the quality on every fiction element. 101 Questions looks at overarching issues, small details, and writing technique. You may learn about new techniques and tips, see a method differently, or realize that you forgot a trick. This handy list of 101 questions explores many possible ways to improve specific areas, add layers and depth, strengthen conflict, find plot holes, and identify writing issues.

Contents:  Workshop and Checklist,  All About STORY,  All About Editing,  The Beginning,  Sample Openings,  Plot & Structure,  Chapters & Pacing,  Scenes,  Characters,  Dialogue,  Setting,  The End,  Strong Writing,  & Final Checks
Sample Question – #40. Do all of your characters have strong feelings about each other?

Working on this element truly adds another layer to your story. In life, we meet people and classify them right away. It’s not often that we know a person but don’t have any opinions or feelings about them. But we see that in stories all the time.

Sometimes I read or edit a novel and have a hard time telling the characters apart. This arises when the characters aren’t distinct, but it’s also caused by a lack of feeling toward each other. If your hero really dislikes another character, that will color the hero’s description and interaction with that character.

Take a closer look at your work: make a list of all of your characters and then describe how your hero feels about them. If your hero doesn’t feel anything that shows in your story right now, do you need to make that character more colorful? And by colorful, I mean annoying, more pushy, more opinionated, more deceitful, more secretive, more talkative, more silent, more helpful, more sweet, more of a pushover, more something?

Look at the relationship between all of your main characters. It might help to make a chart. Then think about how they interact and secretly feel about each other. You can have a lot of fun in this area, and it really deepens your story.


101 Qs for your novel

And here’s the box set for anyone who doesn’t have Blockbuster Books already.

Both books are in Kindle Unlimited so you can borrow them,so people who aren’t signed up to use that program might want the box set.

And information on the second book:

Blockbuster BooksBlockbuster Books, Broken Down

Learn from mega bestselling novels to build your own breakout plot!

Why start from scratch and reinvent storytelling? Instead, use a 7 point plot outline developed from wildly successful novels.

“Blockbuster Books, Broken Down” is a workbook style guide that reveals the structure and elements in huge bestsellers of the last fifteen years, many of which became movies. By breaking down these books, we can see how successful authors are breaking out by satisfying readers’ needs.

This is a hands-on fiction workshop packed with insights and activities to quickly teach you breakout plotting and novel development.


A story and a sentence walked into a bar together…

They both noticed a woman with long, dark hair and an inviting smile, so they sat at the bar, four stools away from her. She glanced over at their entrance before turning back to her conversation with her friends. Sentence told Story, “Watch this. I’m going to wiggle my perfect construction at her. She won’t be able to resist!”

Story watched as Sentence tried to catch the woman’s eye. The woman and her friends gave Sentence a few polite glances, but they weren’t interested.

When Story had enough, he announced, “My turn!” He walked around Sentence to sit closer to the woman and gave her a nod and a wink. The woman immediately moved down the bar three seats to talk to Story.

“Your characters are amazing! How did you come up with this idea, anyway?” She leaned closer and tilted her head back to tease him with a half smile. “And the twist at the end! I didn’t see that coming, but then it made perfect sense. Please tell me there’s a sequel. Does Jake ever win Kathryn over, and does his father ever forgive him? Is there another mystery to solve?”

Story motioned for another round of drinks and murmured, “I’ll tell you everything if you have a few hours…”

Sentence sulked in his seat. What had he done wrong?

“Sentence” missed the simple fact that readers don’t go into bookstores and online retailers to buy groups of sentences. There aren’t any reviews that read, “This book is full of perfect sentences! Check out the metaphor on page 82. The sentences were so wonderful that I forgot about the story and highlighted the commas and semicolons. This author knows how to vary sentence length! Wonderful!”

Readers often say a novel is well written, and they might mention the imagery or fresh use of language, but that alone won’t win readers. Personally, I don’t want to throw a reader out of the story with a impressive sentence. I want the plot and characters to pull the reader in so she’ll keep reading past her bedtime. Of course, I don’t want poor writing to distract the reader either, but I know the point of the novel is the story.

As an artist, do you want others to see the picture you’re painting or the brushstrokes?

Do you need to write well on a sentence level to write good stories? Yes, of course! But are the sentences more important than the story you’re telling? Not in my opinion. Aren’t authors selling stories, not sentences?

Writing well is very important. I don’t mean to argue that point, but it really bugs me when I hear someone put down a mega bestselling author for their writing. It’s usually on a sentence level: “Look at all the clichés, passive voice, and simple sentences! A fifth grader could write better.” It could be true–the given book might very well be full of sentences that could be written better. Maybe their modifiers don’t line up. Maybe they like using clichés as shortcuts in certain places. Maybe they choose choppy or run on sentences over proper grammar to show the character’s thoughts and emotions. But, if the writing really is that poor, then the author must be doing something else right. And that “something else” really sells copies. Millions of readers are buying those books. Despite what people say, you can’t sell a book month after month on marketing alone. If it’s not a good story, people complain. They won’t tell other people about the book.

Readers want an experience away from their life. They want to get sucked into a great story that makes them forget everything else for a few hours. They want to connect with the character and see the world differently. They want to experience a great story. They want to feel.

So, yes, please learn to write sentences well and play with language. Study English, spelling, and grammar. Create fresh images and strive to be original. Learn how to write well so readers can understand what you’re saying. And if you want to sell that writing, remember your job is to tell a damn good story.

…and Upcoming Novels

So, on the writing front, I edited several novels over the last few months for other authors. It’s been a hugely fun process, and I got to work in romance, fantasy, historical, and crime fiction. I’ve been editing for ten years, and the last few years I’ve seen a dramatic increase in quality in terms of writing and the stories I’m seeing. I think it’s due to the Indie movement and all the content so readily available. There’s books, articles, blogs and Facebook groups that help writers learn about writing and the publishing process. So, it’s lots of fun all around!

And yes, I’m working on my own novels too. I’m working to finish the 4th novella in the Stranger series. It’ll be the final one and complete the story, although it opens the door for a new series if I want to continue it. Here’s the cover for the 4th book:

http://www.dreamstime.com/royalty-free-stock-photography-sexy-young-couple-love-image21300227 Meg finally learns the truth and has decisions to make…

(I don’t want to give the story away yet, especially if people didn’t read the first three.)

I’ll publish this one and then a full novel version with all four novellas.

And…

I also started another story inspired by a video on Facebook. You might have seen the clip of a girl at a cam when the kiss cam zooms in on her and her boyfriend. The guy ignore the kiss cam but a mascot runs over and carries her off. I love that video! And I wanted to start a story with that, so I did. It might be a novella – I’m not sure at this point. I’m just having fun with it and writing away. Here’s the cover. What do you think???

Marry the Mascot cover

This story is lighthearted and fun with a big dose of humor.

Working blurb:

The Trail Blazer’s mascot sweeps Abby off her feet, literally, but she doesn’t get his name. Luckily he happens to know she writes the “Honest Abby” column in a local paper. The mascot is a fun loving, hot guy, but he also has a sick father and a load of responsibilities that lead to a little complication.